Think
Did you think
because my will is strong
I have no weaknesses?
Did you think
because you see no tears
I do not weep?
Did you think
because I do not kneel that
I do not pray?
Did you think
because I could not stay
that I went willingly?
Do you think
because I do not speak
I do not care?
My will bends to my fate.
My tears are shed in secret.
My prayers are whispered in solitude.
My steps away from you are labored.
My words remain locked safely within my heart.
Do you think the truth is easy?
Don’t think.
Look at me…..
and see.
Cheryl KP
2014
This could easily become my favourite poem. Loved it!
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Thank you for the kind words. I am glad it struck a chord. I have cone to understand that poetry, like art, is left to the reader as to what its interpretation may be. I am always pleased when someone finds a bit of truth in my words. 🙂
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oh yes, I think that’s very true … it’s like the ever hackneyed «in the eyes of the beholder»
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Beautifully written,and heart felt! Cheryl,
Never look at someone and assume anything,for things are hardly ever how they appear to be!
And a very beautiful photo!
Have a wonderful day,my friend 🙂
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Thank you, and you as well Marion.
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Drawing conclusions without adequate understanding of the situation is destructive and amounts to judgement.
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That is certain Peter. In this world there is a fine line between discernment and judgement and often the line becomes very faint. Thanks for reading.
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I love your poetry, and this one about appearances is fantastic. Very nice.
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Thank you Karen. I am very happy you like it. Thanks for reading. 😊
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I agree with Dan and Echoes. It’s nice to read your posts without having to wear my night vision goggles, for a change. 🙂
Nice poem Cheryl. I am guilty of judging from time to time also.
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Well thats good. Can’t have you straining those old eyes. Lol. Glad you enjoyed the poem too.
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The light background does make it easier to read. I love the structure of this poem, the ending is very powerful.
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Thanks Dan. I appreciate you reading. Glad the new format is working also. 🙂
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First of all, apologies for not having stopped by in awhile, but what with writing and enjoying a spectacular time in the West Highlands of Scotland I’ve been a little negligent in keeping up with my favourite blogs and posts.
I really like the new style blog/layout, and whilst I thought the original style complimented your poetry, having read this particular piece, it’s lost none of its impact or feeling. Having said that, I did particularly enjoy the theme and premise here; a bit of a departure and a much ‘stronger’ feel to it I think from some of your previous poems, but an equally successful one.
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Thank you very much for the feedback. I liked the dark background for photos but a couple of people had trouble reading due to the contrast. I also like the cover oage that displays multiple post links with photos. I bookmarked your short story to go back and read again. Glad you had a good time in Scotland!
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Good one, I had this habit of assuming things, but when I started working at Microsoft Tech Support, I was taught not to assume things and situations, because ASSUME..makes ASS of U and ME.
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Ab.So.Lute.Ly…:)
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Beautiful and it reminds us to not make assumptions.
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Thank you Sue. Assuming and judging are very challenging things in life…
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